Get Me Rewrite: I think, therefore I delete
By Charlie Meyerson, veteran broadcast, print and digital journalist and publisher of the award-winning daily email news briefing Chicago Public Square
Next time you find yourself writing or saying “I think,” think again.
Ironically, the phrase “I think” suggests you might also not think. It undercuts the authority of whatever follows.
“I think the decision to play winter sports at this time is wrong.”
“I think it’s time for electric jets to replace today’s jets, just as electric motors have destroyed traditional internal combustion engine vehicles.”
If you’re writing or saying a thing, rest assured your audience will perceive your words as conveying what you think.
And a special note to reporters: You often can begin your quotes after those words:
“I think that this group is so vehemently opposed to the legislation and the will of the voters that they will do anything to stop it,” Desai said.
“I think” can be useful if you’re contrasting your beliefs with those of others or intentionally expressing uncertainty.
But otherwise? Lose it—unless you’re the sort of person who typically says things he or she or they don’t believe. And haven’t we had enough of them lately?
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